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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-07-01
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  A.) You were supposed to meet your friend downtown this weekend but you made plans to meet another friend to watch a movie. How are you going to tell her/him or suggest several alternatives for getting together in the future? Please elaborate on your answer. - Hello - How are you? -I'm good thanks for asking. -We've decided to meet on this weekend, right? -I'm so sorry but on this weekend one of my friends who comes back to korea finally after 3 years and it is her business trip so she will be able to -spend time with her friends only this weekend. -So would it be possible for us to meet next weekend? -On next week I have no plans yet so we can meet anytime you can. How about on next saturday that you don't have work. / -Thank you for your understanding. -On that day your lunch is on me :) -See you on next saturday! B.) Make these sentences into English. 1. 한국의 제조업은 전반적으로 좀 더 많은 투자가 필요하지요. - Korean manufactural industries need to be more invested generally. 2. 그 사람들은 아기의 이름으로 할아버지 이름을 따서 지었지. - Those people name babies after their granddad. 3. 나는 결국 그가 오지 않을 걸 알고 있었습니다. - I already knew that he wouldn't come back. P.S. If I have a writing script homework, the sentences and paragraphs will be longer than usual. I think sometimes it can take longer for you to correct my homework. But you can see my homework anytime you can. You don't have to hurry to edit it. Thank you always 언니~
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A.) You were supposed to meet your friend downtown this weekend but you made plans to meet another friend to watch a movie. How are you going to tell her/him or suggest several alternatives for getting together in the future? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

- Hello  

- How are you? 

-I'm good thanks for asking.

-We've decided to meet on this weekend, right?

-I'm so sorry but on this weekend one of my friends who comes back to korea finally after 3 years and  it is her business trip so she will be able to -spend time with her friends only this weekend. 

-I'm so sorry but this weekend one of my friends comes back to Korea finally after 3 years and it is her business trip so she will be able to spend time with her friends only this weekend. ​

-So would it be possible for us to meet next weekend? 

-On next week I have no plans yet so we can meet anytime you can. How about on next saturday that you don't have work. / 

=> -On next week I have no plans yet so we can meet anytime you can. How about next Saturday when you don't have work?

 

 

-Thank you for your understanding.

-On that day your lunch is on me :)

-See you on next saturday!

=> See you next Saturday!​

 

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

1. 한국의 제조업은 전반적으로 좀 더 많은 투자가 필요하지요.

- Korean manufactural industries need to be more invested generally.   

2. 그 사람들은 아기의 이름으로 할아버지 이름을 따서 지었지.

- Those people name babies after their granddad.  

=> They named the baby after his grandfather.

 

3. 나는 결국 그가 오지 않을 걸 알고 있었습니다.

- I already knew that he wouldn't come back. 

=> I knew he would not come after all.

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.


P.S. If I have a writing script homework, the sentences and paragraphs will be longer than usual. I think sometimes it can take longer for you to correct my homework. But you can see my homework anytime you can. You don't have to hurry to edit it. Thank you always 언니~ 

 

 

 Hello Won,

I think so too, but it's fine with me. Thank you.