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   제 목   In Australia, what do many people claim are the results of man-made climate change?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-07-02
   작성내용
  A.) In Australia, what do many people claim are the results of man-made climate change? Please elaborate on your answer. In Australia, recently there has happened many catastrophes such as flood, draught, heatwave, and wildfire. Some suspect them to be ascribed to large-scale mining operations. B.) Make these sentences into English. (06/29/22) 1. 그럴 땐 꿀물이 신통하게 잘 들어요. Honey controls that symptom unbelievably. 2. 슬픈 걸 감추기 위해 웃는 가면을 쓴 거지. You are wearing a mask of smile to hide sadness. 3. 내가 깜박 졸았나 보구나. I might have dozed off.
   교정내용
 

A.) In Australia, what do many people claim are the results of man-made climate change? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

   In Australia, recently there has happened many catastrophes such as flood, draught, heatwave, 

and  wildfire. Some suspect them to be ascribed to large-scale mining operations.

 

=>    In Australia, recently there has happened many catastrophes such as floods, droughts, heatwaves

and wildfire. Some suspect them to be ascribed to large-scale mining operations.​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(06/29/22)

 

1. 그럴 땐 꿀물이 신통하게 잘 들어요.

   Honey controls that symptom unbelievably.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> Honey water does wonder in that case. 

 

2. 슬픈 걸 감추기 위해 웃는 가면을 쓴 거지. 

   You are wearing a mask of smile to hide sadness.

=> She just masks her sadness with humor. 

 

3. 내가 깜박 졸았나 보구나.

  I might have dozed off. 

 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.