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   제 목   7/6 Jack HW    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-07-06
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  {HOMEWORK} A.) If you could work for an animal shelter, what would you do for the animals? Please elaborate on your answer. B.) Make these sentences into English. (07/05/22) 1.뭐 하시는 분이니? = What`s he/she`s job? 2.플로리스트야 = He/She`s a florist. 3.카네이션 두 송이 주세요. = Two carnations please. To teacher Colleen. Please give me a clue about person`s sex. I can`t know florist`s sex. I didn`t have a choice.
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{HOMEWORK}

A.) If you could work for an animal shelter, what would you do for the animals? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/05/22)

 

1.뭐 하시는 분이니? = What`s he/she`s job? 

=> What does she do?


2.플로리스트야 = He/She`s a florist.

=> She's a florist.

 

3.카네이션 두 송이 주세요. = Two carnations please.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>  I want two carnations, please.


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.

 

To teacher Colleen. Please give me a clue about person`s sex. I can`t know florist`s sex. I didn`t have a choice.

 

Hello Jack,

 

Both men and women are potentially equally suited for this job, meaning a man could be a florist as well.​​