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   교정강사   Arah(C)    등록일   2022-07-11
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  HOMEWORK: A. What are some good opportunities to meet new people? If I meet new people I would get some opportunities I can't expect. but on the contrary I will just be able to waste my time. B. Make these sentences into English: (07/11/22) 1. 두 사람 외에 배후에서 활동하고 있는 또 다른 사람이 있어요. Besides these two, there is another person who is working behind the scenes. 2. 그는 인생 대부분을 감옥에서 살았습니다. He has been living in a jail most of his life. 3. 당신 조금 전에 나 몰래 내 흉보지 않았나요? didn't you swear me secretly a little while ago?
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HOMEWORK:

A. What are some good opportunities to meet new people?

If I meet new people I would get some opportunities I can't that I didn't expect, but on the contrary I will just be able to waste my time.

​=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically. ​

 

B. Make these sentences into English:

(07/11/22)

1. 두 사람 외에 배후에서 활동하고 있는 또 다른 사람이 있어요.

Besides these two, there is another person who is working behind the scenes. -> There is a third man working behind the scenes.

2. 그는 인생 대부분을 감옥에서 살았습니다.

He has been living in a jail most of his life. -> He's spent most of his life behind bars.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

3. 당신 조금 전에 나 몰래 내 흉보지 않았나요?

D​idn't you swear me secretly a little while ago? -> Didn't you talk about me behind my back just before? ​(Capitalization)

​=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.