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   교정강사   Arah(C)    등록일   2022-07-08
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  HOMEWORK: A. What do you like the most about the city that you live in? My city is new born city in Korea. which was established in order to distributed many authorities that capital, Seoul had. thus it was established by plans the city is very clean and new. B. Make these sentences into English: (07/08/22) 1.내가 태어나기 전인가 봐요. It is before I was born. 2.곧 집에 도착할 거예요. I will arrive at home soon. 3.요즘 웹사이트 없는 비즈니스는 완전히 시대에 뒤떨어진 것이죠. The business without website is totally out of date.
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HOMEWORK:

A. What do you like the most about the city that you live in?

My city is new born city just new in Korea,​ which was established in order to distributed distribute many authorities that the capital city, Seoul, had. 

Thus it was established by plans as planned and the city is very clean and new. (Capitalization)

 

B. Make these sentences into English:

(07/08/22)

1.내가 태어나기 전인가 봐요.

It is before I was born. -> It was before my time.

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically. 

2.곧 집에 도착할 거예요.

I will arrive at home soon. -> I'll be home before very long.

3.요즘 웹사이트 없는 비즈니스는 완전히 시대에 뒤떨어진 것이죠.

The business without website is totally out of date. -> A business without its own website is definitely way behind the times.

=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.