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   제 목   What should be the punishment for vandalizing historical sites?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-07-06
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  A.) What should be the punishment for vandalizing historical sites? Please elaborate on your answer. Punishment for vandalism must be based not on the kind of property but on criminal intent. There is no reason to differentiate historical sites from other properties in punishment for vandalism. B.) Make these sentences into English. (07/06/22) 1.협상을 왜 질질 끌고 있나? Why are you procrastinating on negotiation? 2.도대치 넌 언제 철이 들까? When will you be grown up on earth? 3.털어 놔 봐. You may lay it on me.
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A.) What should be the punishment for vandalizing historical sites? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Punishment for vandalism must be based not on the kind of property but on criminal intent. 

​There is no reason to differentiate historical sites from other properties in punishment for vandalism.   

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/06/22)

 

1.협상을 왜 질질 끌고 있나?

   Why are you procrastinating on negotiation? 

2.도대치 넌 언제 철이 들까?

   When will  you  be grown up on earth?

=> When are you ever going to grow up?


3.털어 놔 봐.

   You may lay it on me. 

 

 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.