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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-07-17
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  A.) What's your neighborhood like? Are there good amenities or well-known places in your city? What are the good points and bad points of living there? Also, tell me about the transportation system in your town? Please elaborate on your answer. - I've been living here for 4 years. When our family decided to move, the most important things we concerned were good amenities and transportation. - Right in front of my house there is a convinience store. - But I don't go there so often, because just cross the walk, there is also a huge grocery store. - I usually go there and get some stuffs. A bus station is also right in front of my house. - And subway station is also 5-minute walk. - I think all I need is around my house for instance medical center, McDonalds, department store etc. - I really love this location! B.) Make these sentences into English. (07/13/22) 1. 우리 둘만의 비밀로 하기로 약속할게. - I'll keep this secret only two of us. 2. 행간을 읽는 것은 작가의 의도를 파악하는 데 핵심적인 일입니다. - Knowing the context is the most important thing to understand the writer's intention. 3. 직장을 구하는 중이에요. - I am looking for a job. {NEXT LESSON} • Opic(New)_Office worker: 014
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A.) What's your neighborhood like? Are there good amenities or well-known places in your city? What are the good points and bad points of living there? Also, tell me about the transportation system in your town? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

- I've been living here for 4 years. When our family decided to move, the most important things we concerned were good amenities and transportation. 

=> I've been living here for 4 years. When our family decided to move, the most important things we were concerned about were good amenities and transportation. ​

- Right in front of my house there is a convinience store. =>  ​ Right in front of my house, there is a convenience store​.

- But I don't go there so often, because just cross the walk, there is also a huge grocery store.  => But I don't go there so often, because on the crosswalk there is also a huge grocery store.  ​

 

- I usually go there and get some stuffs. A bus station is also right in front of my house.  =>  I usually go there and get some stuff. A bus station is also right in front of my house. ​

•​ Stuff can be things and things can be stuff, but stuff is uncountable, whereas things are countable. 

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- And subway station is also 5-minute walk.  =>  And the subway station is also a 5-minute walk.​

- I think all I need is around my house for instance medical center, McDonalds, department store etc.  => I think all I need is around my house for instance a medical center, Mcdonald's, a department store, etc. ​

- I really love this location!  ✔

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B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/13/22)

 

1. 우리 둘만의 비밀로 하기로 약속할게.

- I'll keep this secret only two of us. => I'll keep this secret for only two of us.​


 

2. 행간을 읽는 것은 작가의 의도를 파악하는 데 핵심적인 일입니다.

- Knowing the context is the most important thing to understand the writer's intention. 

•  Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=> Reading between the lines is key to understanding the author's intentions.

 

3. 직장을 구하는 중이에요.

- I am looking for a job. ✔

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• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.​