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   제 목   What is the best way to end island territorial disputes?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-07-15
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  A.) What is the best way to end island territorial disputes? Please elaborate on your answer. Many island territorial disputes would have happened due to powerful countries' greed. When their voluntary retreat could not be expected, there would be no way except an international body's fair arbitration. B.) Make these sentences into English. (07/13/22) 1. 누가 주연인데? Who is playing the leading role? 2. 회사와 지척이에요 It is within a stone's throw from the company. 3. 우리 증권팀에서도 촉각을 곤두세우고 있습니다. Our team of securities is also alert.
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A.) What is the best way to end island territorial disputes? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

 Many island territorial disputes would have happened due to powerful countries' greed.

 When their voluntary retreat could not be expected,  there would be no way except an international body's fair arbitration.  

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(07/13/22)

 

1. 누가 주연인데?

    Who is playing the leading role? 

 

2. 회사와 지척이에요

    It is within a stone's throw from the company. 

 

 

3. 우리 증권팀에서도 촉각을 곤두세우고 있습니다.

   Our team of securities is also alert. 

' Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> That’s keeping our securities team on alert.


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.