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   교정강사   Niah(C)    등록일   2022-07-14
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  A. What complaints do you have these days? It's about my dance club. My team's song is very powerful. So we should dance powerfully. But one of us is dancing so softly. I kept tell her to fix it, but it doesn't get better. B. Make these sentences into English. (07/14/22) 1. 나도 모르겠어. 아 저기 온다! 한번 물어봐. 2. 안녕하세요!만나서 반가워요.질문 하나 해도 돼요? 3. 당연하지. 어서 해봐. -I don't know. Oh he is coming! Ask him. -Hello! Nice to meet you. Can I ask you a question? -Of course. Go ahead.
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A. What complaints do you have these days?

It's about my dance club. My team's song is very powerful. So we should dance powerfully. But one of us is dancing so softly. (Correct)

I kept telling her to fix it, but it doesn't get better. 

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically. 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(07/14/22)

 

1. 나도 모르겠어. 아 저기 온다! 한번 물어봐.

2. 안녕하세요!만나서 반가워요.질문 하나 해도 돼요?

3. 당연하지. 어서 해봐.

-I don't know. Oh he is coming! Ask him. (Correct)

 

-Hello! Nice to meet you. Can I ask you a question? (Correct)

 

-Of course. Go ahead. (Correct)​​