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   교정강사   Stella(D)O    등록일   2023-12-03
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  Today we made Kimchi in my grandmother`s house. Making Kimchi refers to Koreans making large amounts of Kimchi to get through the cold and long winter. Kimchi refers to a Korean-style vegetable storage food seasoned with Korean spices and seafood, and historical records show that even before 760, Koreans had Kimchi in their diet. I like Kimchi very much!
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Making Kimchi 

 

 

Today we made kimchi at my grandmother`s house. Making kimchi refers to Koreans making large amounts of kimchi to get through the cold and long winter. Kimchi refers to a Korean-style vegetable storage food seasoned with Korean spices and seafood, and historical records show that even before 760, Koreans had kimchi in their diet. I like kimchi very much!