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Stella(D)O |
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2023-12-02 |
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I want to have computer because I like computer game. Valorant,LOL,PIPA, this three game is what game I`m playing now.I love very much this three game. So I wish I want to have computer, and play game in my home. But my wish is success! Because I`m go to middle school next year, and my mom said the computer is my middle school present! It`s very good news to me! I want to get my computer quickly!
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Computer I want to have a computer because I like computer games. Valorant, LOL, and PIPA—these three games are what I`m playing now. I love very much these three games. I wish I wanted to have a computer and play games at home. But my wish is success! Because I`m going to middle school next year, and my mom said the computer is my middle school present! It`s very good news! I want to get my computer quickly!
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