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   제 목   Do you think the elephants in Botswana and Zimbabwe died of the same cause?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-11-28
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  A.) Do you think the elephants in Botswana and Zimbabwe died of the same cause? Please elaborate on your answer. Botswana and Zimbabwe share a border with each other. But the border doesn't have any meaning to the elephants that died near the watering pool. So the border between the two countries could not differentiate the cause of the elephants' deaths, which means that they likely died of the same cause.​ B.) Make these sentences into English. (11/24/23) 1. 소비자들에게 더더욱 다가가기 위해서 가격을 낮췄습니다. We cut down the price to come nearer to customers. 2. 저희 가격은 시장에서 평균은 됩니다. Our price would be average in the market. 3. 최소한 2 천대는 주문하셔야 합니다. 2000 or more must be placed.
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A.) Do you think the elephants in Botswana and Zimbabwe died of the same cause? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Botswana and Zimbabwe share a border with each other.
But the border doesn't have any meaning to the elephants that died near the watering pool.
So the border between the two countries could not differentiate the cause  of the elephants' deaths, 
which means that they likely died of the same cause.​​  ✔

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(11/24/23)

 

1. 소비자들에게 더더욱 다가가기 위해서 가격을 낮췄습니다.

We cut down the price to come nearer to customers.  ✔

​

 

2. 저희 가격은 시장에서 평균은 됩니다.

Our price would be average in the market.  ✔

​

 

3. 최소한 2 천대는 주문하셔야 합니다.

2000 or more must be placed.  

=> You must order at least 2,000 units.​

 

 ​• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.