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   제 목   What can be done to increase the panda population?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-12-09
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  A.) What can be done to increase the panda population? Please elaborate on your answer. Female pandas can be pregnant only for one or two weeks, which means that mate timing is important to breed. While pandas are solitary animals, it would be difficult to lead them to meet and mate. So, no idea occurs to me on how to increase the panda population. B.) Make these sentences into English. (12/04/23) 1. 점점 커져가는 중산층이 시장을 키우고 있습니다. Gradually growing middle class expands the market. 2. 특히 컴퓨터 수요가 많습니다. There is high demand, especially for computers. 3. 조사에 의하면 한국에는 얼리어답터가 많습니다. According to a survey, a lot of early adopters are in Korea.
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A.) What can be done to increase the panda population? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Female pandas can be pregnant only for one or two weeks which means that the mate timing is important to breed. 

While pandas are solitary animals, it would be difficult to lead them to meet and mate. 

So, no idea occurs to me on how to increase the panda population.    

     

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(12/04/23)

 

1. 점점 커져가는 중산층이 시장을 키우고 있습니다.

   Gradually growing middle class expands the market.  

       

2. 특히 컴퓨터 수요가 많습니다.

  There is high demand, especially for computers.  

   

3. 조사에 의하면 한국에는 얼리어답터가 많습니다.

  According to a survey, a lot of early adopters are in Korea.  

 

 

 • Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.