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   제 목   Was it a good idea to revoke Article 370?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-01-05
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  A.) Was it a good idea to revoke Article 370? Please elaborate on your answer. Article 370 seems to have functioned as a balance weight between the majority and the minority in India. Although the government officials said that revoking it would be helpful for the economy, it would be just an excuse. B.) Make these sentences into English. (01/05/24) 1. 정기적인 주문을 점차적으로 늘릴 계획입니다. We will expand periodic order gradually. 2. 판매가 좋은 조짐을 보인다면 더 주문하도록 하겠습니다. If sale has good sign, we will place more order. 3. 신용장과 상품에 대한 상세 정보가 필요합니다. We need detailed information on the letter of credit and goods.
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A.) Was it a good idea to revoke Article 370? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Article 370 seems to have functioned as a balance weight between the majority and the minority in India.  

Although the government officials said that revoking it would be helpful for the economy,  

it would be just an excuse.

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/05/24)

 

1. 정기적인 주문을 점차적으로 늘릴 계획입니다.

We will expand periodic order gradually.  

 

2. 판매가 좋은 조짐을 보인다면 더 주문하도록 하겠습니다.

If sale has good sign, we will place more order.

=>  If the sale has a good sign, we will place more orders.​

 

 

3. 신용장과 상품에 대한 상세 정보가 필요합니다.

We need detailed information on the letter of credit and goods. 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.