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   제 목   Why do you think many people voted for Mr. Milei?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-12-28
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  A.) Why do you think many people voted for Mr. Milei? Please elaborate on your answer. Mr. Milei doesn't seem to have realistic policies to settle Argentina's problems. So many people might have voted for him not because they acclaimed him but because they disliked the current government. B.) Make these sentences into English. (12/18/23) 1. 저희 하이브리드 차는 휘발유나 배터리 또는 두 가지의 조합으로 가동됩니다. Our hybrid cars work with gasoline or battery or combination. 2. 저희 수익의 2 퍼센트는 아프리카에 있는 AIDS 환자들을 돕는데 쓰입니다. 2% of our profit is used to help the patients of AIDS in Africa. 3. 저희 회사는 한국에 있는 고아원에 주기적으로 도움을 주고 있습니다. Our company has periodically sponsored an orphanage in Korea.
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A.) Why do you think many people voted for Mr. Milei? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Mr. Milei doesn't seem to have realistic policies to settle Argentina's problems.

So many people might have voted for him not because they acclaimed him 

but because they disliked the current government.   

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(12/18/23)

 

1. 저희 하이브리드 차는 휘발유나 배터리 또는 두 가지의 조합으로 가동됩니다.

Our hybrid cars work with gasoline or battery or combination.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=> Our hybrid cars can run on gasoline engines, batteries or both.

 

2. 저희 수익의 2 퍼센트는 아프리카에 있는 AIDS 환자들을 돕는데 쓰입니다.

2% of our profit is used to help the patients of AIDS in Africa. 

 

3. 저희 회사는 한국에 있는 고아원에 주기적으로 도움을 주고 있습니다.

Our company has periodically sponsored an orphanage in Korea.

•  Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> Our company has regularly helped orphanages in Korea as well.

 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.