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   제 목   2023.01.05    상 태  
   교정강사   Noemi(C)    등록일   2023-01-09
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  A. Please make two sentences using the word "celebrate". -winning a golf tonrnament is something to celebrate. -there are many things to celebrate in the world. B. Make these sentences into English. (01/05/22) 1. 그들은 단순한 결혼식을 했다. they did(had) a simple wedding. 2. 넌 네 중요한 약속을 깼어. you broke your important primise. 3. 그 남자는 날카로운 칼을 갖고 다녀. the man takes(carries) a sharp knife. (i have a question) both did and had are possible? both takes and carries are possible?
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A. Please make two sentences using the word "celebrate".

-winning a golf tonrnament is something to celebrate.

 => Winning a golf tournament is something to celebrate.

  => Corrected: The spelling and capitalization of this sentence have been corrected.  ​

     

-there are many things to celebrate in the world.

 => There are many things to celebrate in the world.

  => Corrected: The capitalization of this sentence has been corrected.  

 

 B. Make these sentences into English. 

 (01/05/22)

 1. 그들은 단순한 결혼식을 했다.

they did(had) a simple wedding.

 => They had a simple wedding.

2. 넌 네 중요한 약속을 깼어.

you broke your important primise.

 => You broke your important promise.

  => Corrected: The spelling of this sentence has been corrected. 

3. 그 남자는 날카로운 칼을 갖고 다녀.

the man takes(carries) a sharp knife.

 => The guy is carrying a sharp knife.

  => Corrected: The spelling of this sentence has been corrected.  

 

(i have a question)

both did and had are possible?  // May I use "did" or "had" in this sentence?

both takes and carries are possible? // Is it possible to use "take" or carried" in this sentence?

 

 Hello, Miss Jane!

 I am a little confused about your question. Here are some sentences that may be related to the last sentence.

• The guy (did) bring a knife. 

• The guy had a knife.

• The guy took a knife.

• The guy carries a knife.