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CORRECTIONS:
We need music in our lives.
Then why do we need music in our lives? First, music makes us feel comfortable or exciting. (Please be careful with the spacing and avoid redundancy of words.)
Second, we don't have to play any instruments. ("Can't" is use when it's a skill you don't have. While "don't" is imperative.)
Lastly, training music improves our learning and memories like piano.
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