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   제 목   Why should people celebrate King’s life and achievements?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-02-15
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  A.) Why should people celebrate King’s life and achievements? Please elaborate on your answer. If there had not been King's leadership, discrimination between white and black people in America would have been more severe. So it is enough for his achievements to deserve to be celebrated or commemorated. B.) Make these sentences into English. (02/14/24) 1. 최종 제안을 수락할 지 고민 좀 해봐야 겠습니다. I need more time to decide if I accept the final proposal. 2. 상사와 상의하고 나서 답을 드리겠습니다. I will answer you after I consult my boss. 3. 최종 제안을 거절하겠습니다. I will reject the final proposal.
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A.) Why should people celebrate King’s life and achievements? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

If there had not been King's leadership, discrimination between white and black people in America would have been more severe.

So it is enough for his achievements to deserve to be celebrated or commemorated. ✔️

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(02/14/24)

 

1. 최종 제안을 수락할 지 고민 좀 해봐야 겠습니다.

I need more time to decide if I accept the final proposal.  ✔️

 

2. 상사와 상의하고 나서 답을 드리겠습니다.

I will answer you after I consult my boss.  ✔️

 

3. 최종 제안을 거절하겠습니다.

I will reject the final proposal.  ✔️

 

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.