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   제 목   Should more countries join Operation Prosperity Guardian?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-01-22
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  A.) Should more countries join Operation Prosperity Guardian? Please elaborate on your answer. The ocean is too spacious to cover all. The more countries take part, the denser the network the Operation Prosperity Guardian would have. B.) Make these sentences into English. (01/19/24) 1. 외국기업들은 같은 제품을 보다 낮은 가격에 제시하고 있습니다. Foreign companies are proposing lower prcie for the same products. 2. 그들은 관세 문제로 같은 곤란을 겪고 있지 않습니다. They are not in difficulty of customs. 3. 조금 더 깎아줄 수 있나요? Could you give me a bit more discount?
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​A.) Should more countries join Operation Prosperity Guardian? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The ocean is too spacious to cover all.

The more countries take part, the denser the network the Operation Prosperity Guardian would have.  ✔️

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B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/19/24)

 

1. 외국기업들은 같은 제품을 보다 낮은 가격에 제시하고 있습니다.

Foreign companies are proposing lower prices for the same products. ✔️

​2. 그들은 관세 문제로 같은 곤란을 겪고 있지 않습니다.

They are not in the difficulty of customs.  ✔️

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3. 조금 더 깎아줄 수 있나요?

Could you give me a bit more discount?  ✔️

​•  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.