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   제 목   Why did the scientists describe the pools as a "lost world"?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-01-22
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  A.) Why did the scientists describe the pools as a "lost world"? Please elaborate on your answer. Many years ago, some novelists wrote books about expeditions for the unmapped areas of Central South America and Amazon. The lagoon area scientists recently found in the Atacama plateau seems to be similar to the scene of novels. So they might call it a lost world. B.) Make these sentences into English. (01/17/24) 1. 가격인상 없이는 거래가 불가능합니다. Without raising the price, trades would be impossible. 2. 다른 선택의 여지가 없었습니다. Different choices could not be regarded. 3. 이 상태로는 재료비도 감당 못합니다. At this state, we can't pay for the ingredients.
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A.) Why did the scientists describe the pools as a "lost world"? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

 Many years ago,  some novelists wrote books about expeditions for the unmapped areas of Central  South America and Amazon.

 The lagoon area scientists recently found in the Atacama plateau seems to be similar to the scene of novels.

So they might call it a lost world.  ✔️

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/17/24)

 

1. 가격인상 없이는 거래가 불가능합니다.

 Without raising the price, trades would be impossible.  ✔️

​2. 다른 선택의 여지가 없었습니다.

Different choices could not be regarded.  ✔️

​3. 이 상태로는 재료비도 감당 못합니다.

At this state, we can't pay for the ingredients. 

   Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

=> We cannot cover our material costs at this rate.


  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.