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   제 목   Jan. 14th homework by Taegyu    상 태  
   교정강사   Happy(C)    등록일   2024-01-11
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  A. Name some disasters that you know of. There are some disasters: 1. Earthquake: Earthquake is that the land is shaking. It could be just shaking a little if it's weak, but if it is strong, the land can be cracked! 2. Typhoon: Typhoon is the heavy wind with heavy rain. Typhoon often causes flood. 3. Drought: Drought is that there is no(or little) rain. With drought, land may splited. B. Make these sentences into English. (01/11/24) 1. 그녀가 울고 있어. 왕비가 그녀를 쫓아냈어. She's crying. The queen threw her out. 2. 그런데, 일곱 난쟁이들은 어디에 있지? By the way, where are the 7 dwarfs? 3. 그들은 무대에 곧 나올 거야. We're going to meet them soon.
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A. Name some disasters that you know of.

There are some disasters:

1. Earthquake: Earthquake is that the land is shaking. It could be just shaking a little if it's weak, but if it is strong, the land can be cracked!

Better: An earthquake is defined as trembling in the ground. If it's weak, it might simply be trembling a little, but if it's strong, the land could crack!

2. Typhoon: Typhoon is the heavy wind with heavy rain. Typhoon often causes flood.

Corrected: Typhoon is the heavy wind with heavy rain. Typhoons often cause floods.

3. Drought: Drought is that there is no(or little) rain. With drought, land may splited.

Corrected: Drought means that there is no (or little) rain. With drought, land may be split.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(01/11/24)

1. 그녀가 울고 있어. 왕비가 그녀를 쫓아냈어.

She's crying. The queen threw her out.

2. 그런데, 일곱 난쟁이들은 어디에 있지?

By the way, where are the 7 dwarfs?

3. 그들은 무대에 곧 나올 거야.

We're going to meet them soon.

Thank you so much for answering your homework. Keep studying!​