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   제 목   Why was the Bronze Age an important moment in human history?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-02-04
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  A.) Why was the Bronze Age an important moment in human history? Please elaborate on your answer. Bronze is a mixed metal strong enough to make farming implements. It could be said to enable people to create civilizations. That is why the Bronze Age was an important moment in human history. B.) Make these sentences into English. (02/01/22) 1. 조회가 끝나는 대로 주문하신 것을 보내겠습니다. I will send your order as soon as checked. 2. 조회할 수 있는 회사나 은행 이름을 보내 주시겠어요? Can I have a name of either company or bank to check? 3. 코리안 은행에 연락하시기 바랍니다. Please refer to a Korean bank.
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A.) Why was the Bronze Age an important moment in human history? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Bronze is a mixed metal strong enough to make farming implements.

It could be said to enable people to create civilizations.

That is why the Bronze Age was an important moment in human history.  

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

(02/01/22)

 

1. 조회가 끝나는 대로 주문하신 것을 보내겠습니다.

I will send your order as soon as checked.  

 

 

2. 조회할 수 있는 회사나 은행 이름을 보내 주시겠어요?

Can I have a name of either company or bank to check?

=>  Will you please send us the names of companies or banks to which reference can be made?

 

3. 코리안 은행에 연락하시기 바랍니다.

Please refer to a Korean bank.  

 

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.