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   제 목   What I did do during Lunar New Year-homework    상 태  
   교정강사   Lovely(D)O    등록일   2023-02-02
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  First,I went to Gwangalli Beach to see a new year drone show. And I visited my grandparents and get some money $$$$$ And I went shopping I did some games for the new year event:). That's all :P
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First, I went to Gwanganli beach to see the new year drone show.

After that, I visited my grandparents and got some money.

And I went shopping.

I played some games for the New Year's event.

That's all I did in New Year.