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   제 목   Should Ms. Ardern have resigned as prime minister?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2023-02-19
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  A.) Should Ms. Ardern have resigned as prime minister? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer. Ms. Ardern confessed that she had nothing left in the tank. She must be in a burnout state when normal execution could not be anticipated. So her resignation is rational and deserves praise and applause. B.) Make these sentences into English. (02/17/22 ) 1. 데이터베이스 소프트웨어에 향상된 기능을 추가할 필요가 있습니다. The enhanced function needs to be added to the database software. 2. 견본이 당사가 보낸 모델과 다릅니다. The specimen is different from what we sent. 3. 당사의 새로운 디지털 카메라는 품질보증이 되어 있습니다. Your new digital camera is guaranteed of quality.
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A.) Should Ms. Ardern have resigned as prime minister? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Ms. Ardern confessed that she had nothing left in the tank.

She must be in a burnout state when normal execution could not be anticipated.

So her resignation is rational and deserves praise and applause.     

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(02/17/22 )

 

1. 데이터베이스 소프트웨어에 향상된 기능을 추가할 필요가 있습니다.

The enhanced function needs to be added to the database software.  

 

2. 견본이 당사가 보낸 모델과 다릅니다.

The specimen is different from what we sent.  

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3. 당사의 새로운 디지털 카메라는 품질보증이 되어 있습니다.

Your new digital camera is guaranteed of quality. 

​​ =>  Our new digital camera is quality guaranteed.

 

• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.