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   제 목   Would you like to attend a royal wedding?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-02-22
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  A.) Would you like to attend a royal wedding? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer. A wedding should be an event where a man and a woman proclaim their marriage to acquaintances. Whether it is royal or not can't affect my will on the participation. B.) Make these sentences into English. (02/21/24) 1. 전신환 송금을 통한 대금결제를 선호합니다. We prefer payment by telegraphic transfer. 2. 신용장을 여는 것은 추가적으로 몇 가지 거래방법을 가능케 만들지요. Opening letter of credit makes some additional transactions available. 3. 대금지불은 전신환 송금으로 하셔야 합니다. You should make payment by telegraphic tranfer.
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A.) Would you like to attend a royal wedding? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

A wedding should be an event where a man and a woman proclaim their marriage to acquaintances.

Whether it is royal or not can't affect my will on the participation.   ✔️

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(02/21/24)

 

1. 전신환 송금을 통한 대금결제를 선호합니다.

 We prefer  payment by telegraphic transfer. 

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>  Payment through wire transfer is preferable.

 

2. 신용장을 여는 것은 추가적으로 몇 가지 거래방법을 가능케 만들지요.

 Opening a letter of credit makes some additional transactions available.  ✔️

​3. 대금지불은 전신환 송금으로 하셔야 합니다.

 You should make payment  by telegraphic transfer.  ✔️

 

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.