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   제 목   Will Iran and Pakistan be able to solve the problem with separatist groups in Baluchistan?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-02-20
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  A.) Will Iran and Pakistan be able to solve the problem with separatist groups in Baluchistan? Please elaborate on your answer. The Baluchi people have lived in the region of Baluchistan whereas they have not had their own country. They might not have been allowed to decide how they manage to live or whether they govern themselves in their own countries. Now it is time for the separatist groups to be listened to because the problem solver of Baluchistan could not be either Iran or Pakistan. B.) Make these sentences into English. (02/19/24) 1. 대금결제 조건에 대해 알고 싶습니다. I want to know about the condition of the cost settlement. 2. 송장일로부터 한 달 후에 대금을 지불해주시면 됩니다. You should pay the amount one month after the invoice date. 3. 해외주문은 선불이며 현금이나 수표로 결제하셔야 합니다. Overseas orders must be paid in advance by cash or check.
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A.) Will Iran and Pakistan be able to solve the problem with separatist groups in Baluchistan? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The Baluchi people have lived in the region of  Baluchistan whereas they have not had their own country.

They might not have been allowed to decide how they manage to live or whether they govern themselves in their own countries.

Now it is time for the separatist groups to be listened to because the problem solver of Baluchistan could not be either Iran or Pakistan. ✔️

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(02/19/24)

 

1. 대금결제 조건에 대해 알고 싶습니다.

 I want to know about the condition of the cost settlement.  ✔️

2. 송장일로부터 한 달 후에 대금을 지불해주시면 됩니다.

 You should pay the amount one month after the invoice date.  ✔️

​3. 해외주문은 선불이며 현금이나 수표로 결제하셔야 합니다.

Overseas orders must be paid in advance by cash or check.   ✔️

 

 

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.