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   제 목   Should Denmark have coronation ceremonies for its new monarchs?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-02-05
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  A.) Should Denmark have coronation ceremonies for its new monarchs? Please elaborate on your answer. The coronation in a monarchy could be likened to the inauguration of president in a republic. The inaugural ceremoney will function for the president to have a chance to rocognise the role and responsibilty. Although a monarch has few powers in the constitutional monarchy, she or he will play a role of center for people. So as long as the system exists, Denmark would better take a coronation ceremony for its new monarch. B.) Make these sentences into English. (02/02/24) 1. 귀사의 목표가격을 주시면 방안을 마련해 보겠습니다. Let us know your target price and we will find a solution. 2. 타협에 이르기 위해 노력해 봅시다. Let's endeavor to reach an agreement. 3. 현재 시장가를 감안하면 저희 가격은 할당합니다. Considering the current market proves our price proper.
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A.) Should Denmark have coronation ceremonies for its new monarchs? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The coronation in a monarchy could be likened to the inauguration of president in a republic.
The inaugural ceremoney will function for the president to have a chance to rocognise the role and responsibilty.
Although a monarch has few powers in the constitutional monarchy, she or he will play a role of center for people.
So as long as the system exists, Denmark would better take a coronation ceremony for its new monarch.

​=>  The coronation in a monarchy could be likened to the inauguration of the president in a republic.

The inaugural ceremony will function for the president to have a chance to recognize the role and responsibility.

Although a monarch has few powers in the constitutional monarchy, she or he will play the role of center for the people.

So as long as the system exists, Denmark would better take a coronation ceremony for its new monarch.  ✔️

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(02/02/24)

 

1. 귀사의 목표가격을 주시면 방안을 마련해 보겠습니다.

  Let us know your target price and we will find a solution.   ✔️

​2. 타협에 이르기 위해 노력해 봅시다.

 Let's endeavor to reach an agreement.  ✔️

 

3. 현재 시장가를 감안하면 저희 가격은 할당합니다.

Considering the current market proves our price proper.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>  Our price is reasonable given the current market rates.


  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.