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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-02-01
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  A.) What made the Disney Company a very successful organization? Please elaborate on your answer. The Disney Company was set up around the 1920's. Since then, it has produced many animations featuring animal characters that attract or move people. That would have led it to success as it is now. B.) Make these sentences into English. (01/31/24) 1. 저희가 드린 대안을 받아들이시겠습니까? Would you accept our proposal? 2. 죄송하지만, 가격차이를 극복하기가 어려울 것으로 보입니다. I am sorry that it would be difficult to overcome the price difference. 3. 합의에 이르기 어려울 수도 있습니다. We could be difficult to reach an agreement.
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​A.) What made the Disney Company a very successful organization? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

​The Disney Company was set up around the 1920's.
Since then,  it has produced many animations featuring animal characters that attract or move people.
That would have led it to success as it is now.​   ✔️

​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/31/24)

 

1. 저희가 드린 대안을 받아들이시겠습니까?

  Would you accept our proposal? ✔️

​2. 죄송하지만, 가격차이를 극복하기가 어려울 것으로 보입니다.

 I am sorry that it would be difficult to overcome the price difference.  ✔️

​3. 합의에 이르기 어려울 수도 있습니다.

 We could be difficult to reach an agreement.

=>  It could be difficult to reach an agreement.​


•  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.