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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-01-29
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  A.) Would you like to visit Craigievar Castle? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer. The Craigievar Castle is famous for its wall covering style known as a lime-based harling. Those who major in architecture would need to go there. But although I am not an architecture, I have no reason to reject it if I have a chance to visit Craigievar Castle in Scotland, . B.) Make these sentences into English. (01/26/24) 1. 그것은 저희가 찾는 가격대가 아닙니다. It is beyond the price level which we are looking for. 2. 귀사의 경쟁사들은 훨씬 더 낮은 가격을 제시하고 있습니다. Your competitors are proposing a much lower price. 3. 저희 제품의 품질을 감안하면 적정한 가격이라고 생각합니다. Considering our product's quality, it is a reasonable price.
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A.) Would you like to visit Craigievar Castle? Why or why not? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The Craigievar Castle is famous for its wall covering  style known as  a lime-based harling.

Those who major in architecture would need to go there. 

But although I am not an architecture, I have no reason to reject it if I have a chance to visit Craigievar Castle in Scotland, .

 

=>  The Craigievar Castle is famous for its wall covering style known as a lime-based harling.

Those who major in architecture would need to go there. 

But although I am not an architect, I have no reason to reject it if I have a chance to visit Craigievar Castle in Scotland.

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/26/24)

 

1. 그것은 저희가 찾는 가격대가 아닙니다.

It is beyond the price level which we are looking for.  ✔️

​2. 귀사의 경쟁사들은 훨씬 더 낮은 가격을 제시하고 있습니다.

Your competitors are proposing a much lower price.  ✔️

​3. 저희 제품의 품질을 감안하면 적정한 가격이라고 생각합니다.

Considering our product's quality, it is a reasonable price.  ✔️

 

  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.