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   제 목   Why do many Egyptians support Mr. Sisi?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-01-25
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  A.) Why do many Egyptians support Mr. Sisi? Please elaborate on your answer. Many Egyptians might think that only an authoritarian person can manage to lead their country. So although they are reluctant to vote for Mr. Sisi, they seem to be not able to avoid choosing him. B.) Make these sentences into English. (01/24/24) 1. 첫 거래일 경우 특별할인 혜택을 드립니다. We will give a special discount benefit for the first deal. 2. 추가 할인을 해주는 경우가 흔치 않습니다. An additional discount is unusual. 3. 청구일로부터 3 일 이내에 대금을 지불해 주시면 추가 할인해 드립니다. When you make a payment within 3 days from the claim date, you can anticipate an additional discount.
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​A.) Why do many Egyptians support Mr. Sisi? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

Many Egyptians might think that only an authoritarian person can manage to lead their country.

So although they are reluctant to vote for Mr. Sisi, they seem to be not able to avoid choosing him.  ✔️​

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/24/24)

 

1. 첫 거래일 경우 특별할인 혜택을 드립니다.

   We will give a special discount benefit for the first deal.  ✔️

​2. 추가 할인을 해주는 경우가 흔치 않습니다.

 An additional discount is unusual.  ✔️

​3. 청구일로부터 3 일 이내에 대금을 지불해 주시면 추가 할인해 드립니다.

When you make a payment within 3 days from the claim date, you can anticipate an additional discount. ✔️

​•  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.​