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   제 목   Which countries do you think should be members of the Security Council?    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2024-01-23
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  A.) Which countries do you think should be members of the Security Council? Please elaborate on your answer. The UN's Security Council is a representative body. Its members represent respectively regional countries which elect them. But currently, it is likely to be jammed in an obstacle which hinders its function. The obstacle is the P5's veto. So after abolishing the P5's veto, those countries that are apt to represent their respective region should be the members of the Security Council. B.) Make these sentences into English. (01/22/24) 1. 정기적으로 구매할 것을 약속합니다. We promise to make a periodic purchase. 2. 우리쪽 재정상태를 감안해서 더 깍아주시기 바래요. I want you to regard our financial state to give us more discount. 3. 저 가격으로는 거래할 수 없을 것 같습니다. We are not likely to trade at that rate.
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​A.) Which countries do you think should be members of the Security Council? Please elaborate on your answer.

 

The UN's Security Council is a representative body.

Its members represent respectively regional countries which elect them.

But currently, it is likely to be jammed in an obstacle which hinders its function.

The obstacle is the P5's veto.

So  after abolishing the P5's veto,  those countries that are apt to represent their respective region  

should be the members of the Security Council.  ✔️

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B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(01/22/24)

 

1. 정기적으로 구매할 것을 약속합니다.

  We promise to make a periodic purchase.  ✔️

​2. 우리쪽 재정상태를 감안해서 더 깍아주시기 바래요.

 I want you to regard our financial state to give us more discount.  ✔️

​3. 저 가격으로는 거래할 수 없을 것 같습니다.

 We are not likely to trade at that rate.  ✔️

 

•  Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.