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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-03-23
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  What birthday traditions are unique to your culture? Well, there is nothing different we celebrate on a birthday. We buy a birthday cake and sing a birthday song sitting around the table. After we singing, she blows off the candles on the cake. These are common in the world. Specially, we make seaweed soup for the one who has birthday. We make some special foods for her and eat them together. On birthday, we buy some present for her but as of now we prefer to give some money instead of present. (03/22/21) -이 입국 신청서 양식을 작성해 주세요. -Please fill in the entry application form. -전 소주 세 병을 마신 후 정신을 잃었습니다. -I passed out after drinking 3 bottles of soju. -조심해. -Be careful.
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What birthday traditions are unique to your culture?

 

Well, there is nothing different how we celebrate a birthday. We buy a birthday cake and sing a birthday song while sitting around the table. After singing, the birthday celebrant blows off the candles on the cake. These are common customs in the world. We make seaweed soup for the one who has birthday. We cook and prepare special foods for the birthday celebrant and we eat them together. On birthdays, we buy some presents for the birthday celebrant but now we prefer to give some money instead of a present.

 

 

(03/22/21)

-이 입국 신청서 양식을 작성해 주세요.

-Please fill in the entry application form.-> Please fill out these immigration forms.

 

 

-전 소주 세 병을 마신 후 정신을 잃었습니다.

-I passed out after drinking 3 bottles of soju. ->I passed out after my third bottle of so-ju.

 

-조심해.

-Be careful.-> Watch out.

 

 

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