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   교정강사   Mariel(C)    등록일   2021-03-22
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  A. How often do you drink fruit juice? What kind of fruit juice do you drink? B: I don`t like fruit juice. I sometimes drink juice that my kids left . B. Make these sentences into English. -의사들은 흔히 아주 장시간 근무를 한다. Doctors often work very long times. -한 무리의 아이들이 거리에서 공을 가지고 놀고 있었다. Children of a Group play with a ball on the street. -나는 창문 쪽으로 몸을 움직였다. I moved to window.
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 How often do you drink fruit juice? What kind of fruit juice do you drink? 

Answer: I don`t like fruit juice. I sometimes drink juice that my kids left . --> I don't like fruit juices. I sometimes drink what my kids had left. 


​=> Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/expression.


 

Doctors often work very long times. ------> Doctors often work very long hours. 


= > Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/expression.​

 

Children of a Group play with a ball on the street. ------> A group of kids were playing with a ball in the street.


= > The sentence is corrected grammatically. ​

 

I  moved to window.  ------> I moved towards the window. 


= > The sentence is corrected grammatically. ​