아이디   비밀번호  

영작교정(첨삭)

  • home  Home>
  • 마이페이지>
  • 나의 수업관리>
  • 영작교정(첨삭)
   제 목   hi    상 태  
   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-03-21
   작성내용
  I might want to say that I am a repairwoman(hihi). My bathroom had a drain problem. So I wanted to call for plumer and searched for that online. I found out that if a plumer visit my apartment to repair blocking the drain, I have to pay more money depending on the state. I took a lot of work to solve the problem and I finally pulled out the plastic drain screen and got rid of hairy things. I put it into the drain hole again and this was the moment I got to be a repairwoman. Now everything is okay. You know, it's like we don't thank until we have some problem in the house. Well, I am not a christan, I know we have a lot of things to be thankful. I can breathe a fresh air even at home because of the mountain near my place. This is the best thing I have since we moved in. Bye
   교정내용
 

I might want to say that I am a repairwoman. My bathroom had a problem with the drainage. So, I wanted to call a plumber. I searched for a plumber online and I found a plumber to repair the clogged. I have to pay much money depending on the condition / state. It took a lot of work to solve the problem and I finally pulled out the plastic drain and got rid of the hair. I put back the drain hole again and that was the moment I got to be a repairwoman. Now everything is okay. You know, it’s like we don’t become thankful of everything until we have some problems in the house.

Well, I am not a Christian, I know we have a lot of things to be thankful. I can breathe fresh air even at home because of the mountain near my place. This is the best thing I have since we moved in.

Bye.