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   제 목   03/30/21    상 태  
   교정강사   Gen(C)    등록일   2021-03-30
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  A. What's your birthday wish for your dad? - I want to have new cell phone. -무슨 일 하시니? -What does he do? -플로리스트야.나는 꽃을 좀 샀어. -He is a florist. I bought some flowers. -무슨 꽃? - What flower?
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A. What's your birthday wish for your dad?

- I want to have new cell phone.---> I want to have a new cell phone.

=> Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

-무슨 일 하시니?

-What does he do? 

-플로리스트야.나는 꽃을 좀 샀어.

-He is a florist. I bought some flowers.

 

-무슨 꽃?

- What  flower?​​