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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-04-02
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  I said good bye to the table tennis members with Kakao Talk in the morning. I got some blue with that. Fortunately, sunlight goes through window in the veranda and I sat down in a chair texting to them. It's like that I took a sunlight shower and it made me feel relax. Sometimes my daughter says I am like a plant. Because I often sit down in the sunlight on the veranda. I have a bad memory before I moved in. We didn't have a sunlight on the veranda before. Sunlight are blocked from the next tall apartment. So our veranda was dark and cold. Number 1 requestment of moving out was to get sunlight indoor. Now I feel comfortable when I have a cup of coffee in the morning. By the way, I like this proverb: The door is closed and another door is opened.
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I said goodbye to the table tennis members on Kakao Talk in the morning. I felt blue with that.

Fortunately, the sunlight goes through the window in the veranda and I sat down on a chair while texting with them. It's like I took the sunlight shower and it made me feel relaxed. Sometimes, my daughter says I am like a plant. Because I often sit down on the veranda to have the sunlight. I had a bad memory before I moved in. The sunlight didn’t pass through the veranda before.  The sunlight is blocked from the next tall apartment. So, our veranda was dark and cold. The reason we moved out from our old house because the sunlight didn’t pass through our veranda. Now I feel comfortable when I have a cup of coffee in the morning. By the way, I like this proverb: The door is closed and another door is opened.