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   교정강사   Mariel(C)    등록일   2021-03-31
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  HOMEWORK: A. What's the most encouraging book you've ever read? B. When I took care of my kids, I sometimes had a lot of hard time. Parenting books gave me help every time. -유가가 바닥으로 떨어졌다. The oil price was to be bottom. -나에게 친절을 베풀다. kind to me. -나는 그녀의 눈길을 끌려고 애썼다. I tried to get her.
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A. What's the most encouraging book you've ever read?

B. When I took care of my kids, I sometimes had a lot of hard time. 

Parenting books gave me help every time. -- Parenting books were helpful in those times. => Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

 

The oil price was to be bottom. -- > The oil price has hit bottom. 

 

kind to me. -- > Would you do me a favor? 

 

I tried to get her.  -- > I tried to catch her eye. 

 

=> Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.