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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-04-07
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  It's an election day. We should vote mayor in Seoul and Busan. As I live in Seoul, our family members voted for one of candidates in Seoul. I voted for No 7 Her kyung young, who announced to give us money monthly. Well, after election my daughter and I stopped by the grocery store and bought some oranges and cookies. We took them to my apartment on foot. Chery blossoms on the street are beautiful. (04/07/21) -우리는 서로를 거의 보지 않는다. -We rarely see each other. -우리나라에서는 드물게 지진이 일어난다. -Earthquake is rarely happened in our country. -넌 나를 다시는 보지 않을 거야. -You are not going to see me again.
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It's election day. We should vote for a mayor in Seoul and Busan. As I live in Seoul, our family members voted for one of candidates in Seoul. I voted for No. 7 Her name is Kyung young, who announced to give us money monthly. Well, after the election my daughter and I dropped by to the grocery store and bought some oranges and cookies. We took them to my apartment on foot. Chery blossoms on the street are beautiful. 

 

(04/07/21)

-우리는 서로를 거의 보지 않는다. -We rarely see each other. -> We hardly see each other.

 

 

-우리나라에서는 드물게 지진이 일어난다. -Earthquake is rarely happened in our country. -> Earthquakes rarely occurs in my country.

 

 

- 나를 다시는 보지 않을 거야.

-You are not going to see me again. -> You will never see me again.

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