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   교정강사   Enya(C)    등록일   2021-04-07
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  A. Are young people generally more selfish than their parents and grandparents? Does age make you more aware of and caring for others? I think the most of people are getting better understanding about sharing happiness and caring each others with age. When they are young, people are more concern their own life. As they have more experience and getting old, they can have more volume for sharing their things. B. Make these sentences into English. (04/07/21) -우리는 서로를 거의 보지 않는다. We have hardly met each other. -우리나라에서는 드물게 지진이 일어난다. Earthquakes are rare in our country. -넌 나를 다시는 보지 않을 거야. You might not see me any more.
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A. Are young people generally more selfish than their parents and grandparents? Does age make you more aware of and caring for others?

 

I think the most of people are getting better understanding about sharing happiness and caring each others with age. When they are young, people are more concern their own life. As they have more experience and getting old, they can have more volume for sharing their things.

 

I think the most of people are getting better understanding about sharing happiness and caring each others with age.​ --> I think most people are getting better understanding about sharing happiness and caring each others with age.​

 

When they are young, people are more concern their own life.​ --> When they are young, people are more concern with their own life.​

 

As they have more experience and getting old, they can have more volume for sharing their things.--> As they have more experience and they're getting old, they can have more volume for sharing their things.​​

 

 

 

 

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

(04/07/21)

-우리는 서로를 거의 보지 않는다.             

We have hardly met each other. --> We hardly see each other.

 

-우리나라에서는 드물게 지진이 일어난다. 

Earthquakes are rare in our country. --> Earthquakes rarely occurs in my country.

 

-넌 나를 다시는 보지 않을 거야.                

You might not see me any more. --> You will never see me again.

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