아이디   비밀번호  

영작교정(첨삭)

  • home  Home>
  • 마이페이지>
  • 나의 수업관리>
  • 영작교정(첨삭)
   제 목   Writing homework(21.4.9)    상 태  
   교정강사   Sarah(C)    등록일   2021-04-09
   작성내용
  Q:What would you like to do this weekend? A: I just want to relax at the weekend. -나는 수족관에 갈거야. I'll go to the aquarium. -와, 멋지다! 나도 수족관에 가고 싶다. Wow, cool! I want to go to the aquarium. -너는 무엇을 What do you
   교정내용
 

Q:What would you like to do this weekend?

A: I just want to relax at the weekend. => I just want to relax this weekend.​ 

 

=> Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically. 

-나는 수족관에 갈거야.

I'll go to the aquarium. => I'm going to the aquarium. => Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/expression.

-와, 멋지다! 나도 수족관에 가고 싶다.

Wow, cool! I want to go to the aquarium. => Wow, great! I want to go there, too. 

=>Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/expression.

-너는 무엇을

What do you => What are going to do? => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.​​