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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-04-12
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  It is groomy day. According to weather forcast, it's going to rain today. I said Goodbye to the old tennis club members on kakaotalk. They were good and nice to me. But I was not that comportable with them. They are older than me so they always said to me what to do. I didn't want this relationship so I went back to the table tennis club I used to go. This club is a little far from my apartment, but it doesn't matter to me. I ride a bike to reach there. Anyway when I said goodbye to them, I felt loney. Someday, when I happen to go there and meet them, I'll first say hi. Bye
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It is a gloomy day. According to weather forecast, it's going to rain today.

I said goodbye to my old tennis club members on Kakaotalk. They were good and nice to me.

But I was not that comfortable with them. They are older than me so they always tell me what to do.

I didn't want this relationship so I went back to the table tennis club I used to go.

This club is a little far from my apartment, but it doesn't matter to me.

I ride a bike to reach there.

Anyway, when I said goodbye to them, I felt lonely. Someday, when I happen to go there and meet them, I'll first say hi. Bye​