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   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2021-04-14
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  I can see dinosaur bones in the museum. -나는 요가를 배울 거야. 그래서 몸무게를 줄일 거야. I will learn yoga. So I am going to lose weight. -나는 아무런 계획이 없어. I don't have any plan. -여보세요. 저는 돌돌 인데요심순이 있나요? Hello. This is Doldol. May I speak to Simsoon?
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I can see dinosaur bones in the museum. 

 

-나는 요가를 배울 거야. 그래서 몸무게를 줄일 거야.

I will learn yoga. So I am going to lose weight.

=> I will learn yoga. So, I am going to lose weight.​

OR

=> I'm going to learn yoga. Then I'm going to lose my weight.


-나는 아무런 계획이 없어.

 

I don't have any plan.

=>I don't have any plans.​


 

-여보세요. 저는 돌돌 인데요심순이 있나요?

Hello. This is Doldol. May I speak to Simsoon?​ 

=>​ Hello, this is Doldol. May I speak to Simsoon?​​

OR
=> Hello, this is Doldol. Is Simsoon there?

• Corrected : The sentences are corrected grammatically.