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   교정강사   Mariel(C)    등록일   2021-04-14
   작성내용
  A. What kind of movies do you watch? Why? I watch cartoon movies. B. Make these sentences into English. -나는 요가를 배울 거야. 그래서 몸무게를 줄일 거야. I will learn yoga. So I'm going to lose weight. -나는 아무런 계획이 없어. I don't have any plan -여보세요. 저는 돌돌 인데요심순이 있나요? Hello. I'm a stone.Do you have Simsooni?
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What kind of movies do you watch? Why?

I watch cartoon movies. 

 

​I will learn yoga. So I'm going to lose weight. --> I'm going to learn yoga. Then I'm going to lose my weight. => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 I don't have any plan --> I don't have any plans. => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.(Punctuation)

Hello. I'm a stone. Do you have Simsooni? --> Hello, this is Doldol. Is siomsoon there? => Corrected : The sentence is corrected grammatically.