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   교정강사   Mariel(C)    등록일   2021-04-14
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  A. When did you start playing video games? I don't know well B. Make these sentences into English. -글쎄, 잘 모르겠어. 계획을 짜야해. Well, I'm not sure. I have to make a plan. -덕보야 무슨 생각 하니? Deokbo, what are you thinking? -난 좋은 생각이 있어. 난 할머니, 할아버지 댁에 갈 거야. I have an idea. I'm going to my grandmother and grandfather's house.
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A. When did you start playing video games?

I don't know well​. --> I forgot. => Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

Please try to elaborate your answer.

 

Well, I'm not sure. I have to make a plan. -- > Well, I don't know. I have to make plans. => Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

 Deokbo, what are you thinking? -- > Dugbo, what are you thinking? => Corrected spelling.

I have an idea. I'm going to my grandmother and grandfather's house. -- >  I have a good idea. I'm going to visit my grandparents.  => Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.