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   교정강사   Mariel(C)    등록일   2021-04-14
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  -내일이 어버이 날이잖아.너는 카네이션 준비했니? Tomorrow is Parents' Day.Did you prepare carnations? -이런! 깜빡 했어.나도 사야겠다. Oh no! I forgot.I should buy it, too. -그런데 돈이 없네. 나에게 돈 좀 빌려줄수 있니? But I don't have any money. Can you lend me some money?
   교정내용
 

Tomorrow is Parents' Day. Did you prepare carnations? --.Tomorrow is Parent's day. Did you prepare the carnations? 

Oh no! I forgot. I should buy it, too. --> Oops! I forgot. I have to buy them, too. 

But I don't have any money. Can you lend me some money? --> But I have no money. Can I borrow some money? 

 

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