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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-04-14
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  HOMEWORK: A. Would you rather explore the oceans or outer space? The oceans. B. Make these sentences into English. -나는 요가를 배울 거야. 그래서 몸무게를 줄일 거야. = I`ll studied yoga. Then I`ll cut down the weigh. -나는 아무런 계획이 없어. = I don`t have any plan. -여보세요. 저는 돌돌 인데요 심순이 있나요? = Excuse me, I`m Doldol. Is there shimsun?
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A. Would you rather explore the oceans or outer space?

The oceans. -> Please try to elaborate your answer.

 

B. Make these sentences into English.

-나는 요가를 배울 거야. 그래서 몸무게를 줄일 거야. = I`ll studied yoga. Then I`ll cut down the weigh. -> I'm going to learn yoga. Then I'm going to lose my weight. => Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.

 

-나는 아무런 계획이 없어. = I don`t have any plan. => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.

 

-여보세요. 저는 돌돌 인데요 심순이 있나요? = Excuse me, I`m Doldol. Is there shimsun? _> Hello, this is Doldol. Is siomsoon there? => Your sentence has a correct grammatical structure, but this has the correct usage/ expression.