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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-04-17
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  Are you having a good weekend? My husband and I went to lake far from my apartment. While we were walking around the lake, it was raining. We didn't bring an umbrella, so we wet. It was a little cold and we rushed to get into the car. My husband turned on the heater so it made us warm. It stopped raining. We walked around the lake again. Lake looked peaceful and there were no boats. We could see only 2 ducks going through the lake. We often go there in the weekend. The air and water are clean. It's good to stay calm. If my mom come to see me to my apartment, I want to bring her with us to enjoy the scenary of the lake. I miss my mom!
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Are you having a good weekend?

My husband and I went to a lake that was far from my apartment. While we were walking around the lake, it rained. We didn't bring an umbrella, so we got wet. It was a little cold and we rushed to get into the car. My husband turned on the heater so it made us warm. It stopped raining. We walked around the lake again.  The lake looked peaceful and there were no boats. We could see only two ducks going through the lake. We often go there on weekends. The air and water are clean. It's good to stay calm. If my mom comes to my apartment, I want her to come with us to enjoy the scenery of the lake.

I miss my mom!