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   교정강사   Sarah(C)    등록일   2021-04-16
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  Q:What kind of jewelries would you like to buy? I like to buy a necklace because it is one of the most ordinary jewelries. 여기 있다 Here you are. -고맙습니다. Thank you. -잘 가라! Good bye!
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Q:What kind of jewelries would you like to buy?

I like to buy a necklace, because it is one of the most ordinary jewelries. (Correct)

 

여기 있다

Here you are. (Correct)

-고맙습니다. ​

 

Thank you. (Correct)​

 

-잘 가라!

Good bye! (Correct)​​