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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-04-16
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  A. What is the best thing about camping? How about the worst thing? It is cheap comparing to staying at pension. My husband and I have never experienced camping. It is uncomportable. Because we can't use bathroom so we can't take a shower. how about washing dishes? We are getting old so we are willing to spend more money rather than save more money. But if they are young, camping is a good hobby to enjoy nature. I am so sure that they don't think camping is uncomportable. They enjoy camping itself. (04/16/21) -난 너무 많이 먹었다. -I ate too much. -난 아버지보다 어머니가 좋아. -I prefer mother to father. -이건 가장 위험한 미션이야. -This is the most dangerous mission.
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A. What is the best thing about camping? How about the worst thing?

It is cheap compared to staying at a pension. My husband and I have never experienced camping. It is uncomfortable. Because we can't use the bathroom so we can't take a shower. How about washing the dishes? We are getting old, so we are willing to spend more money rather than save more money. But if they are young, camping is a good hobby to enjoy nature. I am so sure that they don't think camping is uncomfortable. They enjoy camping itself.   


(04/16/21)

- 너무 많이 먹었다.

-I ate too much. => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.


- 아버지보다 어머니가 좋아.

-I prefer mother to father. -> I like my mother more than my father.  => Another way: Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.


-이건 가장 위험한 미션이야.

-This is the most dangerous mission. => Corrected: The sentence is corrected grammatically.