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   교정강사   Erica(C)    등록일   2021-04-16
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  It is raining now. After raining, new green leaves are coming from trees. They grow fast after rain in Spring. But I like sunny day. As I told you before, I often have a cup of coffee in full sunlight veranda. I am happy with that. I had a coffee looking down trees through the window in the veranda today. Our apartment is the 14th floor of the building, that is the top floor. Before we moved in this apartment, my husband suffered from the noise of upstaires. So he strongly wanted to move out to the top of the building. He is totally free from nosie now. I like this apartment, too. That's because I can see the trees on the bottom of the mountain near my place. I enjoy how the season is changing through the trees. Plus, I am happy with Spring flowers, too. Bye
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But I like sunny day.

As I told you before, I often have a cup of coffee in full sunlight veranda. I am happy with that.

I had a cup of coffee while looking down the trees through the window in the veranda today. Our apartment is on the 14th floor of the building, that is the top floor in the building.

Before we moved into this apartment, my husband suffered from the noise from upstairs. So, he strongly wanted to move out of the top of the building.

He is totally free from the noise now. I like this apartment, too. That's because I can see the trees on the bottom of the mountain near my place.

I enjoy how the season is changing through the trees. Plus, I am happy with Spring flowers, too. Bye